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tactical tactile tales

Tale # 1

sigh of restless heart  

snow embraces plum petals

spring slush touches sodden soul

not fair!

Tale # 2

As above, so below

thus pronounce fine Hermeticists.

However, my experience teaches

as below, so above.

God can only be in our image.

[NOTE: the earlier version had this as the final line: as our vision is far too small.  Zoya  from over at 'somewhere beyond'  who is a poet's poet and a touchstone for me of refined taste and grace, suggested this change.  It's a good one, me thinks! What is your preference?]

Tale # 3

Spring shedding

your undercoat everywhere.

Petting you, I smile.

I'm making a hat out of this year's discards!

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Tale # 4

You say from your grief and crushing pain:

'My disease is a predator.

Soon I will turn and look in its eyes

and announce its victory.'

Your courage and grace pounce on my own not-separate heart.

 

This poem is a submission to One Single Impression prompt:  tactile*  Thanks to Slow Road for the link.

Click on the image or link above to visit a plethora, a plentitude, a party  of other poets' sites from around the world, all writing about this single prompt. 

One Single Impression is a community of poets writing and sharing haiku and other poetic forms. Each week  new prompts are offered up to our often-lazy muses.

*The definition of tactile from the Online Etymology Dictionary: 1615, "perceptible to touch," from Fr. tactile, from L. tactilis "tangible, that may be touched," from tactus, pp. of tangere "to touch" (see tangent). Meaning "of or pertaining to touch" is attested from 1657.

 

Published Monday, May 04, 2009 10:47 AM by Beth Patterson

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Anthony North said:

Loved them all, but Tale 2 is the best.

May 4, 2009 1:27 PM
 

Tumblewords said:

Each one a different track over the terrain of tactile. Enjoyed each one!

May 4, 2009 1:46 PM
 

Jim said:

Hi Beth, these are very nice.  Where do I start, # 3 I guess.  Well, my dogs shed too, do you have a pattern for that hat?  

# 4, I too have a predator disease, my fangs grow long and I bite (mostly women) in the full moon's light!

..

May 4, 2009 2:30 PM
 

Christine said:

These all could be a short story - each one wonderful.

May 4, 2009 3:26 PM
 

SandyCarlson said:

Lovely, lovely, lovely, Beth. That first one speaks to me loud and clear today.

May 4, 2009 3:27 PM
 

Kilauea Poetry said:

Wow..intense this imagery here..inspiring-

May 4, 2009 4:48 PM
 

sue said:

The first tale is exquisitely wrought -- each year there is that moment when winter comes back to dampen our spirits and the petals. Tale two, makes me smile and say "Indeed!" Tale three makes me go "awwww" then reach out to stroke my own shedding buddy. Tale four is inspiring -- I love the phrase "pounce on my heart" so apt.

May 4, 2009 7:28 PM
 

Deborah Godin said:

Wonderful explorations of the prompt - from the humorous to the deeply moving.

May 5, 2009 10:07 AM
 

sandi mcbride said:

My dear Beth...I just received a notification on a post I did some time ago and wanted to come in and thank you for visiting...I hope you didn't think I was rude!  I just didn't know that you had read my hibernation story.  Thanks for the nice comments.  I like tale 4 myself, it fits me to the proverbial tee, since I have just been blessed by God with life after a severe illness...I am going to put you on my blog role, I hope you don't mind.

Sandi from Holding Patterns

May 5, 2009 11:17 AM
 

Geraldine said:

Tale 1 is just stunning, loved it! My fav of the group. Hugs, G

May 5, 2009 1:17 PM
 

zoya gautam said:

sigh of restless heart  

snow embraces plum petals

spring slush touches sodden soul  ..lovely

& an opinion for tale 2 _

if the last line "as our vision is far too small ' is dropped from the tale the punch increases ten fold and something blossoms / ..many thanks ..

May 5, 2009 4:33 PM
 

Sandy said:

The first one gets me today, too. I do like the outlook you have toward the dog, though.

May 5, 2009 5:19 PM
 

floreta said:

the michelangelo is too perfect for the touch prompt! great idea and great series of poems. my favorite is the first.

May 5, 2009 5:42 PM
 

Beth Patterson said:

Hi all--

Thanks for your comments and 'votes'!  Tale # 1 isn't my favorite, but it seems to be yours, so I'm looking at it with new eyes.

Thanks especially to zoya--I really like your suggestion.  I may do an edit of that Tale and give you credit for the new version!

Thanks to all--

May 5, 2009 10:17 PM
 

Beth Patterson said:

OH!

And special hellos to Sandi McBride--I'll sashay over to your blog again and leave you a message, but I just found you thru Sandy Carlson's blog and really like your work!  Thanks for visiting and commenting--and having a cup of virtual tea--

May 5, 2009 10:19 PM
 

zoya gautam said:

.. u embarass me bp-

unless compelled i generally don't express such blatant opinions (it was only because i liked ur verse ) / thanks for being open-mided, ( this tidbit hardly deserves a credit ) ..

May 6, 2009 1:18 AM
 

Beth Patterson said:

So...I took zoya's advice and ended Tale 2 differently.  You can see the previous ending in the 'outtakes' so to speak!  Thanks again,  zoya!

May 6, 2009 10:58 AM
 

patti said:

I loved tham all, but I would have to say I liked tale #3 as we have a doggie who sheds all over the place!  Great pictures as well.

May 6, 2009 7:34 PM
 

patti said:

I will keep trying to do this right.  Now I will try again!

May 6, 2009 7:37 PM
 

a said:

Beth I like them all .. but I must say, #2 appeals to my inner self. Both ending is very fitting.

May 6, 2009 9:55 PM
 

Jeeves said:

Nice one

May 9, 2009 12:57 AM
 

Beth Patterson said:

Anthropomorphizing God and God's kingdom is the best most of us, maybe any of us, can do. Similes, metaphors

May 19, 2009 12:09 PM
 

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September 5, 2009 8:17 PM

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The Virtual Tea House website became 'word-ripe' when, over a cup of jasmine green, I realized that the web has an expanding part to play in the communal aspects of spiritual growth.

With a master's degree in religion, my career spans 20 years in end of life care and I currently work in the field of child abuse intervention and advocacy.

Here in beautiful Central Oregon, my spiritual homes of the high desert and the mountains are both in proximity. And for good measure, four hours away is Grandmother Ocean and the stunning Oregon Coast.

I'm making decent progress on the goal set by my mother early on: she taught us that the goal of humanity should be to become ever-more eccentric, i.e. more fully human.

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