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Beth Patterson

a remedy for what ails the world

This is this week's submission for One Single Impression (prompt # 31): Fleeting

One Single Impression is a community of poets writing and sharing haiku and other poetic forms. Each week a new prompt is offered for inspiration.

So much of the poetry on One Single Impression is beautiful and/or elegant.  This submission is not that or that...

slug-like

contracted

bound up

too much

 

what kind of marketing mischief

calls relief from a century of gobbling consumption

fleet?

shouldn't real relief be called:

'have you considered eating more locavore cruciferous vegetables'?

or

'if you'd exercise a tad more regularly, you'd feel a lot better?'

or, at least:

'one good fight with your significant other would clear this problem right up'?

Or, finally, how about:

'Just stop'

 

Too much stuff

made consumed discarded

everything is breaking down,

thank all the gods and goddesses and all the tea in china.

 

Oh, that this were a fleeting problem.

Or confined to only my gut.

 

The Story of Stuff  with Annie Leonard (full version--worth your time!)

 

 

 

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Published Saturday, September 27, 2008 5:13 PM by Beth Patterson

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JB said:

That is a strange one, Beth.  But I do like how you tie the concept of what's happening to your body to the earth's body.

So the earth needs an enema?  I'm afraid humanity would be (will be)part of the detritus...

September 28, 2008 2:18 AM
 

Gemma said:

This is a very clever piece! For me, you have offered a very serious idea in a hilarious, playful way! To achieve both at once is quite a feat!

September 28, 2008 2:34 AM
 

Beth Patterson said:

Dear Gemma--

Thank you for your kind words--I'm sitting here wondering if I should have posted this--so many thanks!!

And JB--yes, the ties between my (any of our) bodies and the earth's body is the central theme--and I'm afraid of the same thing!

September 28, 2008 2:39 AM
 

Deborah Godin said:

Yes, this is very clever, layers of meaning, and the humor delivers a nice kick, too!  

September 28, 2008 3:55 AM
 

Anthony North said:

Very cleverly done. You make our eco-vandalism more personal here, allying it with the body. And let's face it, the rubbish we put out there enters the food chain and ends up in us.

September 28, 2008 5:37 AM
 

Nathalie (spacedlaw) said:

Great take on the prompt!

September 28, 2008 6:17 AM
 

SandyCarlson said:

I wish this were a fleeting problem, too. You give me pause and make me think. Thanks, Beth.

September 28, 2008 6:42 AM
 

zoya gautam said:

dear beth,

-"you have offered a very serious idea in a hilarious, playful way!"_

"eco-vandalism "-just wonderful..many thanks..

September 28, 2008 9:34 AM
 

Sandy said:

I love it!

September 28, 2008 11:03 AM
 

teric said:

I think it is not only hilarious but very appropo!

September 28, 2008 12:31 PM
 

Beth Patterson said:

Phew--

Glad you all are finding it humorous--it was funny when I started writing it, got sort of serious as I worked with it, and then I feared that it might be too weird, twisted and not-eloquent...

You all are great--thanks for the encouragement!

September 28, 2008 3:22 PM
 

Jim said:

Beth, I love your lecture 'fleeting moments' with "Fleet."  You are right, it isn't a 'fleeting problem.'  :-)

..

September 28, 2008 9:16 PM
 

Nancy Bea said:

Wow, what a cool riff! Great work.

September 28, 2008 9:26 PM
 

Melanie-bd said:

This is strangely beautiful if one looks closely.

I like it very much. I am somewhat new to your poetry. I'm glad I stopped by.

love-bd

September 29, 2008 11:53 AM
 

qualcosa di bello said:

amen to that!!!! (too much stuff says it all)

September 29, 2008 12:06 PM
 

Tumblewords said:

Nifty take on the woes that ail!

September 29, 2008 8:09 PM
 

Beth Patterson said:

Here's a great post on one of my favorite blogs: Soul Shelter.  The title is: 5 ways to have less and enjoy it more   Definitely 'cathartic'!

http://www.soulshelter.com/2008/09/28/five-ways-to-have-less-and-enjoy-more/

September 29, 2008 11:29 PM
 

Pam said:

Love the take on the prompt.  Sometimes fleeting is like a purge.

September 30, 2008 8:23 AM
 

patois said:

That's a brilliant analogy, Beth. Very enjoyable read, and equally compelling.

October 1, 2008 12:22 AM

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The Virtual Tea House website became 'word-ripe' when, over a cup of jasmine green, I realized that the web has an expanding part to play in the communal aspects of spiritual growth.
One of my favorite hats, among several is: initiated firekeeper in the Sacred Fire Community. Hosting a monthly community fire circle, I'm being taught that the simple act of sitting around a fire with the intent of holding open-hearted space makes for some soulful community!
With a master's degree in religion, my career spans 20 years in end of life care and I currently work in the field of child abuse intervention and advocacy.
Here in beautiful Central Oregon, my spiritual homes of the high desert and the mountains are both in proximity. And for good measure, four hours away is Grandmother Ocean and the stunning Oregon Coast.
I'm making decent progress on the goal set by my mother early on: she taught us that the goal of humanity should be to become ever-more eccentric, i.e. more fully human.
Entering the 'forest-dweller' phase of life, I am honored to host the Virtual Tea House for all who wish to explore how our lives are enriched and made new a thousand times each day by the spirituality we embody. Exploring this engagement together is the purpose of the Virtual Tea House.
Welcome! Let's have a cup of virtual tea together and share what brings us joy, what we are being taught by life, how we are leaning into the Big Questions posed to us each day in sometimes 'distressing disguises'.

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