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Ready for the low down

This is this week's submission for One Single Impression (prompt # 29): Seeds  Please visit that site for lots of other original submissions on this same topic...or, better yet, write and  post your own on your blog and link to the OSI  site!    One Single Impression is a community of poets writing and sharing haiku and other poetic forms. Each week a new prompt is offered up to inspire your writing. Participants are invited to share ideas for prompts, too.

Seeds...

slanted light condensing

life force

curling up kinetic

for the low down blow down

heart beating slow steady

ready for the Ancient Ones to warm and water

but first

resting

ready

patient

daniela-caneschi

painting by daniela caneschi

Published Sunday, September 14, 2008 6:36 PM by Beth Patterson

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Julie said:

Oh excellent metre here! Well done ...

I was moving along with the rise and swell of your urgency.

September 15, 2008 4:46 AM
 

Barb's Haiku said:

Very well done! I also chose dandelion seeds! Make a wish and blow!

September 15, 2008 8:05 AM
 

SisterJulia said:

This is so gentle, just like warm dandelion clocks!

Beautiful and well done!

Juliax

September 15, 2008 11:28 AM
 

Raven said:

Lovely poem.  I like the whole thing, but especially those last three line... resting/ready/patient....  and loved  curling up kinetic/for the low down blow down... good poem.

September 15, 2008 12:30 PM
 

Regina Clare Jane said:

Oh, I loved the progression of this and the gentle reminder that for grwoth, one need to rest first... :)

September 15, 2008 1:55 PM
 

Pam said:

"life force curling up kinetic for the low down blow down"-- wonderful line-- you can feel the tension wound up like a spring.

September 15, 2008 2:22 PM
 

Sandy said:

I read this out loud twice. Sounds really good. I like your stuff, Beth.

September 15, 2008 3:42 PM
 

SandyCarlson said:

I love the music this creates. Very exciting!

September 15, 2008 5:03 PM
 

Deborah Godin said:

Very taut, but with explosive energy

September 15, 2008 8:12 PM
 

Tumblewords said:

Love the lyricism of this and the charming photo! Nice work!!

September 15, 2008 10:08 PM
 

teric said:

Such lovely and gentle words.  The perfect image to go with it.

September 16, 2008 10:01 AM
 

zoya gautam said:

..thank u for a nice poem..

September 16, 2008 2:46 PM
 

Beth Patterson said:

Thank youse for visiting and your kind words!  Aren't we having some fun now!

Beth

September 17, 2008 7:27 AM
 

Beth Patterson said:

Sister Julia--

What are warm dandelion clocks?  I think I know what you mean, but I loved the term, and wanted to listen to you talk more about that phrase...wish I could actually hear your voice!

Beth

September 17, 2008 7:29 AM

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About Beth Patterson

The Virtual Tea House website became 'word-ripe' when, over a cup of jasmine green, I realized that the web has an expanding part to play in the communal aspects of spiritual growth.
One of my favorite hats, among several is: initiated firekeeper in the Sacred Fire Community. Hosting a monthly community fire circle, I'm being taught that the simple act of sitting around a fire with the intent of holding open-hearted space makes for some soulful community!
With a master's degree in religion, my career spans 20 years in end of life care and I currently work in the field of child abuse intervention and advocacy.
Here in beautiful Central Oregon, my spiritual homes of the high desert and the mountains are both in proximity. And for good measure, four hours away is Grandmother Ocean and the stunning Oregon Coast.
I'm making decent progress on the goal set by my mother early on: she taught us that the goal of humanity should be to become ever-more eccentric, i.e. more fully human.
Entering the 'forest-dweller' phase of life, I am honored to host the Virtual Tea House for all who wish to explore how our lives are enriched and made new a thousand times each day by the spirituality we embody. Exploring this engagement together is the purpose of the Virtual Tea House.
Welcome! Let's have a cup of virtual tea together and share what brings us joy, what we are being taught by life, how we are leaning into the Big Questions posed to us each day in sometimes 'distressing disguises'.

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